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Gary
Gary
7 years ago

I almost feel like that could almost be a nice cover. I’m not sure exactly how, but it seems like there’s something there.

Ericb
Ericb
7 years ago

Coming soon in a theater neear you!

Filmed in Van Goghvision!

Damien
Damien
6 years ago

First time commenter. The filters kill too much of the detail. If you put the author byline up top and move the title down to the grass it would have done wonders for readability. The font is at least passable, but darken the text a bit — just a few sades darker, and the text would pop a lot more. Also, it could cover most of the filter work, if that’s no longer negotiable.
Now, if only there was any indication of a murder it would be perfect — as long as that house figures for more than two pages of setting.