What Happened to Rhodri

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What Happened to Rhodri

Despite all the problems with this cover, I probably would have posted it except for that font… that font…

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Kris
Kris
9 years ago

Yep – it would be much more frightening with a subtle font. This is horrifying in unintended ways.

James F. Brown
James F. Brown
9 years ago

$1.99 for a 9,760-word short story? I’ve bought massive megapacks for half that.

Pass.

katz
9 years ago

I like that the drop shadow has its own drop shadow.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago

Over all a good start at a cover. Missed by just that much. But the details hurt, like the ground level view that goes clear to the sharply defined clouds on the horizon, kinda spoils the spook for me.

The moon is round. 1:1 aspect ratio. I’ll give a point for that.

Axolotl
Axolotl
9 years ago

I like the composition of it but agree that the text is horrible. The hand in the foreground could have been done better.