The Commander’s Desire

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The Commander’s Desire

“Let me out of here!”

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DED
DED
8 years ago

The photo of the woman was a good start. But then the shirtless dude got in the way. I’m not sure how the sword and chain mail fit here, except to denote setting.

Font colors. Blech!

A case of more is not necessarily better.

red
red
8 years ago
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I agree.

The sword and chain mail would work nicely on the back cover.

The dude needs to be banished to the gym until he gains enough arm and shoulder strength to lift that sword.

john e. . .
8 years ago

The font makes me sea-sick.