All those random images, and still no dolphin, purple or otherwise. Also, either that vehicle is a lot closer than the building, or it is the biggest SUV yet.
Hmm… does this deserve a “mystery meat” tag? I certainly have no idea what this book may be about. And I am not about to go check out the “Look inside!” I have learned better than to do that for books on this site!
It’s a shame–she desperately needs a real cover and she needs proper interior fiction formatting–but I read the first page or so and her writing isn’t bad. She could use a course with a CW 1 or 2 coach, to cut out some unnecessary verbiage (very very typical of first time writers and today, they all publish their s**tty first drafts)–but it’s got potential.
It was a long and winding road: the Purple was everywhere, except at occasional places where it was punctuated by a transparent black porta-potty or a perilously teetering petrol pump (for it is across the road that our victim lies); rattling around the next bend, the author fiercely loomed, the ink from a still-dripping pen melting its way into the purpleness.
LBC Participant
2 years ago
If your dolphin is purple you might consider limiting the flogging.
charles cassady
2 years ago
I think it is a book about the least popular-selling yard-decoration Shadow People.
Johno McMoose
2 years ago
I’d say Purple Dolphin is the name of the house. It’s stopped being purple long ago because of air pollution.
All those random images, and still no dolphin, purple or otherwise. Also, either that vehicle is a lot closer than the building, or it is the biggest SUV yet.
Hmm… does this deserve a “mystery meat” tag? I certainly have no idea what this book may be about. And I am not about to go check out the “Look inside!” I have learned better than to do that for books on this site!
You know you want to… It’s just a few clicks…
LOL! It is tempting. But, no.
It’s a shame–she desperately needs a real cover and she needs proper interior fiction formatting–but I read the first page or so and her writing isn’t bad. She could use a course with a CW 1 or 2 coach, to cut out some unnecessary verbiage (very very typical of first time writers and today, they all publish their s**tty first drafts)–but it’s got potential.
Whew! Go have a look, it’s a hell of a description.
WHAR DOLPHIN??
Flipper!? Where are you, Flipper?!
It was a long and winding road: the Purple was everywhere, except at occasional places where it was punctuated by a transparent black porta-potty or a perilously teetering petrol pump (for it is across the road that our victim lies); rattling around the next bend, the author fiercely loomed, the ink from a still-dripping pen melting its way into the purpleness.
If your dolphin is purple you might consider limiting the flogging.
I think it is a book about the least popular-selling yard-decoration Shadow People.
I’d say Purple Dolphin is the name of the house. It’s stopped being purple long ago because of air pollution.