Mark of the Lash

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Mark of the Lash

This is what happens when someone knows the “how” of PhotoShop, but not the “why.”

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LydiaFCG
LydiaFCG
9 years ago

But–the guns! What’s up with the guns?

Sneaky Burrito
9 years ago
Reply to  LydiaFCG

I’m confused about how the guns are a lighter color, which would suggest they were somehow in the background (under the whip). Only, the lines of part of the gun barrels can be seen where they intersect with the whip, suggesting the gun barrels are on top of the whip. Or else that the whip is transparent.

Kris
Kris
9 years ago

Guns are not whips. Clearly the author has no clue.

gp
gp
9 years ago

It’s a distinctive cover. I’ll grant it that.

LydiaFCG
LydiaFCG
9 years ago
Reply to  gp

It would be much better without the guns.

gp
gp
9 years ago
Reply to  LydiaFCG

Yes. And maybe the whip versus text need a little repositioning.

ASwan
ASwan
9 years ago

I never really understood about font choice and typography’s effects until I started following this blog. I always figured, ‘meh, words are words.’

How much I’ve learned.

I’m actually toying with the idea of making my own book cover when I’m ready to publish, so I’ve been doing lots of research–this website has been invaluable.

Font matters way more than I ever thought it would. A boring cover like this could have been saved by doing something other than Times.

ASwan
ASwan
9 years ago

Okay, I actually posted my previous comment on the wrong cover. Oops. But the font in this one is terrible too. The other stuff is questionable, but the font is really what kills it.

Kregger
Kregger
9 years ago

Is Book II called “Bob of the Sash” or “John of the Mash”