The City of Night

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The City of Night

Once again, placing your title across the busiest spot in your artwork is never good practice. (And the key looks like a nose.)

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L.
L.
9 years ago

While yes, the key looks like a nose, overall I don’t think this is such a bad cover.

Kris
Kris
9 years ago

Take out the distracting eyes (PLEASE!), move the title down, and there is hope.

LydiaFCG
LydiaFCG
9 years ago
Reply to  Kris

Agree. The eyes must go.

DED
DED
9 years ago

I agree. I think this cover could be salvaged.

Retha
9 years ago

Place the title on a place where it does not obscure the best and busiest object in the artwork, replace the font in the author’s name with one that match the title and “The keeper of fates” (which I assume is a series title) fonts, and I’d say this is a good cover.

Waffles
Waffles
9 years ago
Reply to  Retha

No, that font is Papyrus. It auto-fails any attempt to be a good anything!