Plenty of flailing in today’s batch. Flailing hard.
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Author - Nathan
No Pit So Deep: The Cody Musket Story (The Cody Musket Series Book 1)
She’s indoors. He’s outdoors. Together, they’re the pits!
Several true improvements here. Let’s just dwell on those, shall we?
The Rhumgold Sagas: Vampires R Us
Also, check out how the author bio starts:
Hi, my name is Tim Conley. I live in Philadelphia, MS with my beautiful wife, Carmela. My son,James (JD) is in the Air Force and has a son Joshua who is 21/2 with another boy on the way. Carmela’s son – Enrik just graduated from Mississippi State University with a degree in Teaching.
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A fair number of “correct everything but the problem” revisions in today’s batch.
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