Several true improvements here. Let’s just dwell on those, shall we?
Author - Nathan
The Rhumgold Sagas: Vampires R Us
Also, check out how the author bio starts:
Hi, my name is Tim Conley. I live in Philadelphia, MS with my beautiful wife, Carmela. My son,James (JD) is in the Air Force and has a son Joshua who is 21/2 with another boy on the way. Carmela’s son – Enrik just graduated from Mississippi State University with a degree in Teaching.
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A fair number of “correct everything but the problem” revisions in today’s batch.
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Note: If you have published a book cover with the words “Adult Thriller” right in a prepubescent girl’s crotch, you are a bad person.
Everything’s a clear (if incremental) improvement here… except for the one that hits you in the netherlands.
Oh, you weren’t drinking a beverage, were you? (Bonus: The description is a perfect complement to the cover.)