This one seemed kind of mystery meat, to me, so I followed the link to read the blurb which was really uninformative (and word salad.) So I downloaded the “first 15% percent” epub and someone please pass the eye bleach.
B.L. Alley
4 years ago
Size gap also. I can’t even see the second girl.
LPlatePen
4 years ago
“That’s it, Mum, just turn to the camera and… try to look SULTRY, okay? No, the furniture’s not coming until tomorrow, the floor will have to do for now… oh jeez, I gave it a wipe-over this morning, and it’s not like that’s your best dress or anything, is it?”
Centering is for p*ssies.
This one seemed kind of mystery meat, to me, so I followed the link to read the blurb which was really uninformative (and word salad.) So I downloaded the “first 15% percent” epub and someone please pass the eye bleach.
Size gap also. I can’t even see the second girl.
“That’s it, Mum, just turn to the camera and… try to look SULTRY, okay? No, the furniture’s not coming until tomorrow, the floor will have to do for now… oh jeez, I gave it a wipe-over this morning, and it’s not like that’s your best dress or anything, is it?”