Seems like something that could look interesting/cool if done in a consistent style by a decent artist. This looks like something thrown together with clip art.
Catie
10 years ago
The Hounds of Baskerville?
I love this one. It’s so absurd I’m rolling on the floor. That Zombie is hilarious. And the grin on that dog XD.
“I frowned. This was all Bertha’s idea, to meet in our office after regular hours, on her day off. I hope she didn’t plan to finally walk out on me.”
His tenses are all over the place. When you’re in first person, there’s a distance in time, which means that first person assumes the narrator is telling the story AFTER it had happened. You can’t tell a bit of the story after the fact, then switch to before the fact, then during the fact… I mean, you can. You CAN do a lot of things. Doesn’t mean you should.
James F. Brown
10 years ago
Saber-Tooth Doggie!
“Just call me Fang.”
misterfweem
10 years ago
Sometimes, the argument for extending copyright for thousands of years makes itself apparent.
Seems like something that could look interesting/cool if done in a consistent style by a decent artist. This looks like something thrown together with clip art.
The Hounds of Baskerville?
I love this one. It’s so absurd I’m rolling on the floor. That Zombie is hilarious. And the grin on that dog XD.
A friendly warning: don’t look inside.
Dammit, now I am obliged to look inside.
It was a bit metaphortastic, but otherwise? I didn’t look that far to be fair…
“I frowned. This was all Bertha’s idea, to meet in our office after regular hours, on her day off. I hope she didn’t plan to finally walk out on me.”
His tenses are all over the place. When you’re in first person, there’s a distance in time, which means that first person assumes the narrator is telling the story AFTER it had happened. You can’t tell a bit of the story after the fact, then switch to before the fact, then during the fact… I mean, you can. You CAN do a lot of things. Doesn’t mean you should.
Saber-Tooth Doggie!
“Just call me Fang.”
Sometimes, the argument for extending copyright for thousands of years makes itself apparent.