Helpful hint: Your cover fails if the setting looks more real than the people.
Right now, this cover implies that the story is about blurry paper cut-outs living in a 3-D world. If that is the actual story, good job, but I really doubt that it is.
James F. Brown
9 years ago
Squeeze me! Squeeze me! Oh, pleeze…
L.
9 years ago
Is that Lana Turner? And is she crying? There are splotches beneath her eyes that I’m interpreting as representing tears. Or do I need to clean my screen again?
L-Plate Pen
9 years ago
that young lady has serious Neck Problems… but at least she’s not trying to hide hers under a giant collar.
Helpful hint: Your cover fails if the setting looks more real than the people.
Right now, this cover implies that the story is about blurry paper cut-outs living in a 3-D world. If that is the actual story, good job, but I really doubt that it is.
Squeeze me! Squeeze me! Oh, pleeze…
Is that Lana Turner? And is she crying? There are splotches beneath her eyes that I’m interpreting as representing tears. Or do I need to clean my screen again?
that young lady has serious Neck Problems… but at least she’s not trying to hide hers under a giant collar.