Karisanea World of Possibilities Teen Version; Book One Kylen Falls In Love

Karisanea World of Possibilities Teen Version; Book One Kylen Falls In Love

The punctuation alone give me hives.

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Marc
Marc
2 years ago

never follow the link to the book preview never follow the link to the book preview never follow the link to the book preview never follow the link to the book preview never

Nicholas Dollak
2 years ago
Reply to  Marc

Of course, I had to follow the link. Ouch… I can’t feel my legs…

Sounds like the “writer” wants to be the next Ursula K. LeGuin. LeGuin wrote several fine books, but so much of her writing is intolerably dull because she spends 90% of the time building entire worlds/societies. A whole book that only serves as introduction? (And what’s a “contributor”???)

Nicholas Dollak
2 years ago
Reply to  Marc

<cultivator> – mea culpa

Hitch
2 years ago

I couldn’t make it past the epigram (?) or the intro paragraph of the first Chapter. I mean, information dump much? Pure tell, not show. It’s a shame.

RK@HM
RK@HM
2 years ago

This is definitely not a published Kylo-Ren-falls-in-love-with-himself fanfic!

LPlatePen
LPlatePen
2 years ago

Pffffft, way to give away THE ENTIRE PLOT in the TITLE!