I wake up in the middle of nowhere, only captured to another planet. There were some strange signs that I had some power – there was something special about me. I learn about my past, recollecting the puzzle pieces of it one by one. I find the truth and need to do something. The something – it’s hidden behind me, it’s right in front of me, it’s closed in front of me, but I don’t know what it is.
Closed Eyes. Only when your eyes open – do you understand what power lies behind them.
He has to remember his memories as he goes back in time, back to when he and his wife were together. Now separated, the only thing that stops him is his determination. When the eyes open, he lives once again.
What the hellish hell is this hell?
First person, second person, or third person? Pick your POV and stick to it, please! Once that is settled, then you can attack whether this should be present tense or past tense or future tense. Sigh… I don’t want to know what the main text looks like.
Mention of the protagonist’s name, at least once, might help too.
Sheesh, Robbie, it’s part of the mystery!