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Hitch
5 years ago

Narrow Margin, anybody?

Brad
Brad
5 years ago

It had some promise, I think if maybe the train’s smoke-stack looked as if it were conjuring the woman’s image? The knife(?) looks wimpy. I can’t help but think of “You can’t stab a train with a tiny steak knife, you can’t stab a train…”

dtw
dtw
5 years ago

The type treatment’s good. It’s only the haphazard layers at the top (and, as Brad says, the pocket knife) that don’t work.