Needs more white, especially since the cover will seamlessly bleed into the white web page it’s on.
EricL
9 years ago
The book’s blurb doesn’t even make sense:
“Your grandest wish is standing here this day, Merlin, realised only because of your magnificent contribution to this Land…, one that shall shine through Time itself and never be forgotten, even as Yourself… MERLINUS INVICTUS! (The story of King Arthur as told by Taliesin, Arch Bard).
I… I… just shake my head. Maybe it’s for the best that the cover sucks. Take the time to rewrite, dear author, including your book description. Once done with that, go a get a decent cover. Frankly, this one looks like the bathroom line at a nun convention.
When I read the blurb I wanted to scream. Who is standing, the wish or Merlin? What shall shine, the wish or the contribution? Even as yourself WHAT??? Where’s the freaking verb? And what the hell is …, ? Ok, I’m gonna go scream in my pillow now.
Take Cover
9 years ago
Doesn’t matter where you are, there’s just *always* a line for the ladies’ bathroom. Always.
![cover[1]](https://lousybookcovers.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/02/cover169.jpg)
Okay – SHE put the copyright on this one herself.
Needs more white, especially since the cover will seamlessly bleed into the white web page it’s on.
The book’s blurb doesn’t even make sense:
“Your grandest wish is standing here this day, Merlin, realised only because of your magnificent contribution to this Land…, one that shall shine through Time itself and never be forgotten, even as Yourself… MERLINUS INVICTUS! (The story of King Arthur as told by Taliesin, Arch Bard).
I… I… just shake my head. Maybe it’s for the best that the cover sucks. Take the time to rewrite, dear author, including your book description. Once done with that, go a get a decent cover. Frankly, this one looks like the bathroom line at a nun convention.
IT DOES!!!
Oh, you’re right, they ARE nuns. I first thought they were another group famous for wearing white sheets and carrying crosses…
When I read the blurb I wanted to scream. Who is standing, the wish or Merlin? What shall shine, the wish or the contribution? Even as yourself WHAT??? Where’s the freaking verb? And what the hell is …, ? Ok, I’m gonna go scream in my pillow now.
Doesn’t matter where you are, there’s just *always* a line for the ladies’ bathroom. Always.
“Pies Iesu Domine…” WHACK! “Dona eis requiem…” WHACK!
Who else saw the title and immediately thought of the dragonborn from Skyrim?? Then I wanted to call the book “Song of the Twicekiin”…