Knight Commander (The Natanleods Book 1)

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Knight Commander (The Natanleods Book 1)

I really can’t think of a quip that does this justice.

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Kris
Kris
9 years ago

Rule #1: Make the name of your series pronounceable by mortals.

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago
Reply to  Kris

Nat-on-lee-odds

EricL
EricL
9 years ago

Are Natanleods similar to Hemorrhoids?

The pen name is ridiculous. It makes me think that this should be a spoof of your typical epic fantasy… but the artwork screams “stuffy” and “overly serious”.

Hitch
9 years ago
Reply to  EricL

Took the words right out of my mouth–so to speak. That nom-de-plume is the most pretentious thing I believe I’ve ever seen on this site. Positively dreadful.

Sunbow Pendragon. It’s like a commune from my youthful days in the 60’s had sex with a nerd from the 70’s, scribbling “Frodo Lives” on the subway walls in Greenwich Village…and this is their kid.

Viergacht
Viergacht
9 years ago
Reply to  Hitch

I remember seeing a bunch of “how to cast real magic spells” books years ago written by someone who called themselves something like Ravensong Wolfshadow, that always struck me as the most hilariously fake name which probably sounded very impressive to a 14 year old.

Hitch
9 years ago
Reply to  Viergacht

Yes, exactly. That was my thought, too, when I was considering the progeny from my theoretical mating–tween or teenage; closer to tween.

{sigh}

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago
Reply to  Hitch

And you name “Hitch”?

Waffles
Waffles
9 years ago
Reply to  EricL

I looked inside, it was as serious and stuffy as it looks on the cover.

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago
Reply to  Waffles

It’s not for you then…

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago
Reply to  EricL

You are, of course, entitled to you opinion. Your name is uncommonly normal.

Carol Van Natta
9 years ago

Argh, dropshadow/contour gone mad! Makes title hard to read and silly pen name illegible.

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago

I think it looks nice.

Roxann Sellers
Roxann Sellers
8 years ago

So are you a writer, or just a bunch of offensive critics of those that do? I happen to know Ms Pendragon. It Is not a pen name , but her name. She is Wiccan , has carried that name for a very long time and works hard on her books. If you don’t write only criticize, shut up. No one forced you to read her work. Move on to something less serious, more fluffy. Maybe the Kardashian’s wrote something.

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago
Reply to  Roxann Sellers

Thank you Roxanne

Sunbow Pendragon
Sunbow Pendragon
8 years ago

My books are not for everyone, and clearly, it was not meant for you. As far as my name goes, it was given to me by the Goddess for my use.
I do appreciate any constructive criticism.