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Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
7 years ago

My Immortal Frog

RK
RK
7 years ago

Actual quote from the sales page:

In life sometimes only if your lucky enough that is, you come across people who give you inspiration and bring out the best in you, even without them knowing that they do.

This was the case for me with the writing of The Frog that couldn’t croak . Throughout life your paths cross with amazing people, some stay for a day, some stay for a while and some stay for life.

I am lucky enough to be sharing a stroll on the path of life at the moment with someone who’s done just this .

People who often Inspirer others in life don’t realise the gift they carry and their ability to brighten even the darkest places with the presence of their sparkle. I hope the frog that couldn’t croak brings a sparkle to all those who read it, just like the person who Inspired me to write it did.

This cover, in other words, is more truth in advertising; I mean, other than the art on the cover actually being better than its contents!

James F. Brown
James F. Brown
7 years ago
Reply to  RK

If this is an accurate copy of the sales page, the author has a real problem with capitalization issues.

Hitch
7 years ago

My thing is…whom do they expect will stop and open this book, to see what is inside it? Seriously? At the very least, a child will be the only one who might look at this.

I do not understand, I truly do not.

Kregger
Kregger
7 years ago

You mean…it’s not written for children?

James F. Brown
James F. Brown
7 years ago

Ribbit. Ribbit.

Solved the problem for ya! 🙂

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
7 years ago

You all made me Look Inside!

It is a children’s book. At least from the sample.

Seriously, that blurb won’t sell the book to children or parents, and should have been saved for the author’s note. And edited properly.