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Sirona
10 years ago

Hey, I didn’t know zombies carried purses! Does she keep extra toes and fingers in that thing?

I gotta say, filters and all, I kinda like this one. It’s not perfect and could use some tweaks but it’s not nearly as bad as some. The zombie’s face is waaaaay creepy.

Of course the pen name just throws away whatever possibilities the rest of it has. Prototype? Really?

Brian
Brian
10 years ago
Reply to  Sirona

Seriously. Is there a class out there folks can take on pen names?

James F. Brown
James F. Brown
10 years ago

Given the cover, shouldn’t the title be “Bloddy Zombie Chick on the Road to Nowhere”?

Need to be a stickler for accuracy here.

James F. Brown
James F. Brown
10 years ago

Bloody (oops!)

Bruce
Bruce
10 years ago

Ugh, I’m already tired of zombie books! Seeing one with a bad cover makes me feel like having a “Nostalgia Critic” meltdown:

Kregger
Kregger
10 years ago

Road kill?

James,
Don’t you hate it when you can’t edit typos.

James F. Brown
James F. Brown
10 years ago
Reply to  Kregger

On some websites, such as The Passive Voice and Facebook, you can.

Even though I’ve been a writer and editor for over 30 years, I’m still amazed at how typos and other errors suddenly become immediately noticeable right after you post/publish something. 🙁

hotclaws
hotclaws
10 years ago

It’s the and bothers me the most.Is it 2 short stories? a collection? what?

Jen
Jen
10 years ago

Zombie girl looks like she’s floating above the ground. Evidently she can levitate.

Wendy Christopher
10 years ago

Even if you walk in the middle of the Road to Nowhere love, you’re still gonna get run over. Now what have you learned from this?

Cedric
Cedric
10 years ago

What a bunch of snooty douche-canoes. I don’t see your works of artistic and literary genius anywhere. What a bunch of lames.

Tuula
10 years ago
Reply to  Cedric

Since when are only people who possess genius allowed to notice the lack of it in others? If you ask your friend (provided you do have them) if a movie they saw sucked or not, if it is worth spending your time and money seeing, would you not expect them to say their honest opinion, not ‘since I am not equally talented as Kubrick, I cannot offer any opinion on Dumb and Dumber 2’?