Hey, I didn’t know zombies carried purses! Does she keep extra toes and fingers in that thing?
I gotta say, filters and all, I kinda like this one. It’s not perfect and could use some tweaks but it’s not nearly as bad as some. The zombie’s face is waaaaay creepy.
Of course the pen name just throws away whatever possibilities the rest of it has. Prototype? Really?
On some websites, such as The Passive Voice and Facebook, you can.
Even though I’ve been a writer and editor for over 30 years, I’m still amazed at how typos and other errors suddenly become immediately noticeable right after you post/publish something. 🙁
hotclaws
10 years ago
It’s the and bothers me the most.Is it 2 short stories? a collection? what?
Jen
10 years ago
Zombie girl looks like she’s floating above the ground. Evidently she can levitate.
Since when are only people who possess genius allowed to notice the lack of it in others? If you ask your friend (provided you do have them) if a movie they saw sucked or not, if it is worth spending your time and money seeing, would you not expect them to say their honest opinion, not ‘since I am not equally talented as Kubrick, I cannot offer any opinion on Dumb and Dumber 2’?
Hey, I didn’t know zombies carried purses! Does she keep extra toes and fingers in that thing?
I gotta say, filters and all, I kinda like this one. It’s not perfect and could use some tweaks but it’s not nearly as bad as some. The zombie’s face is waaaaay creepy.
Of course the pen name just throws away whatever possibilities the rest of it has. Prototype? Really?
Seriously. Is there a class out there folks can take on pen names?
Given the cover, shouldn’t the title be “Bloddy Zombie Chick on the Road to Nowhere”?
Need to be a stickler for accuracy here.
Bloody (oops!)
Ugh, I’m already tired of zombie books! Seeing one with a bad cover makes me feel like having a “Nostalgia Critic” meltdown:
Road kill?
James,
Don’t you hate it when you can’t edit typos.
On some websites, such as The Passive Voice and Facebook, you can.
Even though I’ve been a writer and editor for over 30 years, I’m still amazed at how typos and other errors suddenly become immediately noticeable right after you post/publish something. 🙁
It’s the and bothers me the most.Is it 2 short stories? a collection? what?
Zombie girl looks like she’s floating above the ground. Evidently she can levitate.
Even if you walk in the middle of the Road to Nowhere love, you’re still gonna get run over. Now what have you learned from this?
What a bunch of snooty douche-canoes. I don’t see your works of artistic and literary genius anywhere. What a bunch of lames.
You don’t know how to click links, then? Pity.
Since when are only people who possess genius allowed to notice the lack of it in others? If you ask your friend (provided you do have them) if a movie they saw sucked or not, if it is worth spending your time and money seeing, would you not expect them to say their honest opinion, not ‘since I am not equally talented as Kubrick, I cannot offer any opinion on Dumb and Dumber 2’?