The Darkening. Book One of the Gift-bearers.

January 12, 2014

The Darkening. Book One of the Gift-bearers.

Periods. In the title. How unconventional.

font boredom typo

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Jen

10 years ago

That big ston phallic thing is one ‘Gift Bearer’ I personally don’t want. Ouch!

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James F. Brown

10 years ago

Reply to Jen

LOL. Not only is it BIG, it’s really hard, too! 🙂

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DED

10 years ago

With that title and that cover image, I would’ve added “BOO-ring” as a label.

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James F. Brown

10 years ago

A minimalist approach to font choice (with shadowing), but way too big and poorly composed on the cover. The periods are the least of the problems here.

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L.

10 years ago

Once again part of the text blends in with the background, making it hard to read.

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