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Ericb
Ericb
10 years ago

When you turn a screenplay into prose fiction shouldn’t you change the nomenclature of the story divisions? Or are they just fantasizing here that their story has been turned into a TV show.

Kregger
Kregger
10 years ago

Maybe a good blood letting will allow that person to lose their paunch.

…unless thos are really bad breasts? In which case it’s a win-win.

Brenda
Brenda
10 years ago

Are those puncture wounds in the neck? Oh well at least they used watercolors instead of crayons with this one.

Sirona
10 years ago

Wait, the words are on her shoulder? I thought that was the middle of her chest with hair on one side and red blouse on the other. Crap, it’s like one of those apple-core/goblet illustrations. Which do you see? And, hey, did you notice the two faces? (Please tell me there aren’t any faces hidden up there. I’m too bleary-eyed to look.)

Jen
Jen
10 years ago
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It is EXACTLY like one of those apple core/goblet pictures! Those have always annoyed me.

Take Cover
Take Cover
10 years ago

Actually I still don’t know what I’m looking at. Is this something to do with [metaphorically?] killing the French flag?

Axolotl
Axolotl
10 years ago

What is the blood spilling onto? A crumpled wad of lavatory paper?