It’s not that bad. I think the silhouettes and the cloud bubbles work. The title placement is cute. It’s only Sylvie that looks like she’s been drawn with the left hand (or foot), she’s the only problem. And the background might be the wrong shade of teal, but I’m not sure about that. The byline is iffy too, but it could work. It could all work if Sylvie were to be fixed.
Naaman Brown
8 years ago
♪ ♫ “She got Orphan Annie eyes…” ♪ ♫ Otherwise, the art does seem to match the mood of the Amazon book blurb in a light YA cartoony kinda a way.
(I’m running outta snark today. It might be time for a run to the Curmudgeon Supply Store.)
James F. Brown
8 years ago
Next, “Sylvie Designs a Cover.”
That’s gonna be hard since Sylve doesn’t appear to have any eyeballs!
Kregger
8 years ago
wasn’t there a movie about Sylvia doing a porno?
no, no, no.
That was Slyvia’s mother saying something…
It’s not that bad. I think the silhouettes and the cloud bubbles work. The title placement is cute. It’s only Sylvie that looks like she’s been drawn with the left hand (or foot), she’s the only problem. And the background might be the wrong shade of teal, but I’m not sure about that. The byline is iffy too, but it could work. It could all work if Sylvie were to be fixed.
♪ ♫ “She got Orphan Annie eyes…” ♪ ♫ Otherwise, the art does seem to match the mood of the Amazon book blurb in a light YA cartoony kinda a way.
(I’m running outta snark today. It might be time for a run to the Curmudgeon Supply Store.)
Next, “Sylvie Designs a Cover.”
That’s gonna be hard since Sylve doesn’t appear to have any eyeballs!
wasn’t there a movie about Sylvia doing a porno?
no, no, no.
That was Slyvia’s mother saying something…