The Dream Gate – Jack Shephard and the Time Wizard

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The Dream Gate – Jack Shephard and the Time Wizard

Looks like somebody in armor needs a V-8.

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Nick
9 years ago

Jack Shephard and the Time Wizard and the Lawyer.

Ebony McKenna
9 years ago
Reply to  Nick

Make Gandalf really small so the lawyers won’t notice, lol!

Kris
9 years ago

What floats? …little tiny rocks?

Even then the answer was no. (Though the knight does have a distinct Pythonsequence quality.)

Kris
9 years ago
Reply to  Kris

*Python-esque. Stupid autocorrect.

EricL
EricL
9 years ago

RJ Perry must be rich to be able to buy the rights to use the “Gandalf” image from LOTR. Too bad he didn’t also pay for a better cut-and-paste job. What it that yellow rock formation behind the title and in front of the barn-house? A petrified 1950s Chevy bumper that time traveled into the scene?

AJ
AJ
9 years ago

Thank you for bringing this to our attention.

-AJ from Smashwords

Ebony McKenna
9 years ago
Reply to  AJ

Oooh, it’s been taken down from Smashwords.

Robbie
Robbie
9 years ago

Is anyone else compelled to pronounce our hero’s name as shef-FARD?

red
red
9 years ago
Reply to  Robbie

I see “Sheephazard” for a split second.

L.
L.
9 years ago

My OCD compels me to want to reach into the screen and straighten up Stonehenge.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  L.

If you do, please get a pressure hose and scrub off that moss or lichen. You think they would do some upkeep rather than let it go to ruin.

L-Plate Pen
L-Plate Pen
9 years ago

Oh Sir Ian Mckellan, have times really got THAT hard?

R.J.Perry
R.J.Perry
9 years ago

I’m sorry if I offended anyone guys. Yes, I did make my own cover as I don’t have much money and am unable to afford a professional to design one. I did my best. Its a childrens book I wrote for my grandson.
Actually, the only copyright issue was with the knight, which was my mistake as I obtained it second hand. An issue which I have since remedied. The wizard is not Gandalf and the image is quite legal Ebony, although it does bare a resemblance. Much as your sketch puts me in mind of Jabba The Hut Nathan.
I did find your comments hurtful, if that was your aim. Thank you for bursting my bubble. I’ll try to do better in future.
Sincerely,
R.J.Perry.