Oh my, two howling typos in the first couple of pages…:
1.
…he asked in a CULTURAL voice.
2.
… stiletto knife flash and felt a blade pierce the inside of her left BEAST
This one needs a copy edit, at least. And no, I’m not just reacting to the NZ orthographic conventions… 😉
You are having WAY too much fun! Is there a prize for having the MOST awful covers on this site? 😀
“Heroin, it’s my wife and its my life.” (partial verse of Lou Reed’s Heroin)
Sorry Lou I made a joke out of your song.
Oh my, two howling typos in the first couple of pages…:
1.
…he asked in a CULTURAL voice.
2.
… stiletto knife flash and felt a blade pierce the inside of her left BEAST
This one needs a copy edit, at least. And no, I’m not just reacting to the NZ orthographic conventions… 😉