I read a few pages of the sample. Not that great, but not QUITE as mind-blowingly awful as this cover would make it seem. And yes, people carry swords.
gCarpenter
10 years ago
Yep. A lousy over. And the story a bit jumbled and jagged. But he did capture the gallows humor of Soldiers in war. Especially Cavalry soldiers in war. And oddly enough, a saber in its scabbard does look a bit like a penis….for some on looking for that sort of thing. But it’s a good frost attempt…especially without an editor. I hope he tries again WITH an editor to he with structure and clarity. He could have an impact in time.
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DUELING PENISES!!!!!
Man, I could have gone all day without my attention being drawn to that…
Because nothing says “Military Sci-Fi” more than… Swords!
At first glance, I thought these were dueling chainsaws!
I read a few pages of the sample. Not that great, but not QUITE as mind-blowingly awful as this cover would make it seem. And yes, people carry swords.
Yep. A lousy over. And the story a bit jumbled and jagged. But he did capture the gallows humor of Soldiers in war. Especially Cavalry soldiers in war. And oddly enough, a saber in its scabbard does look a bit like a penis….for some on looking for that sort of thing. But it’s a good frost attempt…especially without an editor. I hope he tries again WITH an editor to he with structure and clarity. He could have an impact in time.