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Kris
9 years ago

If “Mina’s first adventure…” wasn’t there, then the whole creepy incest vibe wouldn’t be either. But, maybe that’s what this book IS about.

I’m not checking. Just in case.

misterfweem
misterfweem
9 years ago
Reply to  Kris

Adultery is mentioned, but that’s about it. Seems like a conventional tale of intrigue and woe and businesses sinking like the Titanic and younger sisters falling in love with the blue-eyed detective brought in to detect the adultery and solve the murder, all set against the idyllic world of Orange County, California.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  misterfweem

But wait, it’s part of a Complete series of Mina’s Adventures:
1 Love Thy Sister
2 Bosom Bodies
3 Italian Summer
4 Ashes of Autumn

Kris
9 years ago
Reply to  Naaman Brown

The titles sound like edgy erotica to me. #TitleFail

Or is it: #UseIdyllicCoverPhototoScrewWithAmazon
😉

Kris
9 years ago
Reply to  Kris

Oh – and that is NOT Orange County CA. Obviously, the author has never been there.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  Kris

You mean Orange County CA doesn’t look like Heidi’s Switzerland?

Hitch
9 years ago
Reply to  Naaman Brown

Naaman,

Please tell me you made those up. Please.

DED
DED
9 years ago
Reply to  Hitch

Nope. He didn’t make those up.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  Hitch

Indie small press is rife with erotica; if an author is NOT writing erotica they should be very careful in titles, covers, blurbs, tag lines, etc. to avoid the “tells” associated with the genre so they don’t turn away their target audience.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  Hitch

(Hitch,

I wish I could bring myself to lie to you, but you are best served by honesty, I think.)

Hitch
9 years ago
Reply to  Naaman Brown

Naaman:

I am, thanks. It absolutely makes me cringe. I can’t believe anyone is that daft! I mean, if they aren’t creepy-rotica, what where they thinking…and if they are, what the hell are they thinking????

Xande
Xande
9 years ago
Reply to  Kris

Well, I checked the comments on Amazon, and none of them seemed to indicate that it’s that type of book.

What an awful type of false-flagging to have on your cover… how many people might have picked up the book if it didn’t look like it might be about something incestuous?

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  Xande

On the other hand, I wonder if any fans of Baron Lesade bought this book and felt ripped off?

Shea
9 years ago

Is that a table? Are they straddling a table? How long and freakishly jointed are their legs that they can straddle a table yet look as though they’re dangling all normal-like, knees together like proper young ladies?

red
red
9 years ago
Reply to  Shea

I think they are are on the viewer’s side of the bench and have their knees plugged into the bench’s anti-gravity levitation adapter.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
9 years ago
Reply to  Shea

It looks to me like they are sitting sidesaddle on a picnic table, legs toward the viewer, looking over their shoulders at the alpine landscape of scenic Orange County.

Synthetic Paper
Synthetic Paper
9 years ago

I thought the little girl was on fire at first glance.