To me the bottom third elements are not just extraneous. They are irritating and distracting. The boy in the dungeon looks like he has been grounded for the weekend and feels it’s not fair and not really his fault. The girl looks more despairing (as would anyone else confined to a dungeon) but her hair style and blouse just don’t seem to match the timeframe of the castle. The boy is much larger than the girl–looks out of proportion to my eye. Both appear to fade into the floor and they are lit by a source other than the window. (Are they ghosts?)
Must. Join. Positive. Feedback. Theme. (strain) The aspect ratio of the two sky orbs appears properly round and the title font is not Papyrus. (I presume the orange is the sun and the silver is the moon; but if they were sun and near-full moon in the sky at the same time, wouldn’t they be on opposite sides of the sky–assuming the story is set on Earth? Argh. My hideous negativity crept up again. Down boy, bad dog.)
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He ruined a decent cover with the bottom 25%. *sigh* More is not better.
Yes, arrrrrgh, SO CLOSE
Just what I was thinking….”oh, this isn’t so baaaaad…wait a minute.”
‘Thought The Ydron Saga Gazer’? What did he think?
Does anyone know what the font is for “Thought Gazer”?
No, but I like it!
HEY! Positive feedback!
I know! I love it too!
I thought it was “Ringbearer” at first; it’s not, but it’s definitely influenced by it.
Ringbearer looks spot on to me.
It was kind of going OK until I scrolled down.
To me the bottom third elements are not just extraneous. They are irritating and distracting. The boy in the dungeon looks like he has been grounded for the weekend and feels it’s not fair and not really his fault. The girl looks more despairing (as would anyone else confined to a dungeon) but her hair style and blouse just don’t seem to match the timeframe of the castle. The boy is much larger than the girl–looks out of proportion to my eye. Both appear to fade into the floor and they are lit by a source other than the window. (Are they ghosts?)
Must. Join. Positive. Feedback. Theme. (strain) The aspect ratio of the two sky orbs appears properly round and the title font is not Papyrus. (I presume the orange is the sun and the silver is the moon; but if they were sun and near-full moon in the sky at the same time, wouldn’t they be on opposite sides of the sky–assuming the story is set on Earth? Argh. My hideous negativity crept up again. Down boy, bad dog.)