Rise of the Immortal (The Immortal Warrior Book 1)

December 16, 2023

Rise of the Immortal (The Immortal Warrior Book 1)

How can you disrespect your own novel so much that you will let it go out to the world like this?

bad font choice cut and paste layout woes pixelation readability

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Syd

1 year ago

The sad thing, the central medallion motif is a good idea; tried and tested, but layout and fonts matter!

Five min makeover:

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Marc

1 year ago

Does anyone else read it as “Book Onk”?

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Syd

1 year ago

Reply to Marc

yep!

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