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Kris
2 years ago

Wait, the author name is Mayombe and he’s promising the secrets of a group called Palo Mayombe? Is he betraying his own personal secret society or is this more of a recruitment pamphlet?

That aside, the text is too long and too small. I might call this… “Inside a Secret Society”. Make it bigger, maybe slightly diagonal, and that’d be more eye-catching.