The Chosen One Series (The Chose One Series Book 1)

The Chosen One Series (The Chose One Series Book 1)

Jesus deserves better. (Also, ready the description — I double-dog-dare you.)

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Bruce
Bruce
3 years ago

Curse you for the double-dog dare! Bad enough it likely set a record for longest run-on sentence, but my mind almost exploded over the incoherence.

I double-dog dare anyone to read this out loud in one breath.

Syd
Syd
3 years ago

I guess punctuation is one of those details wherein the devil hides.

Ian
Ian
3 years ago

😂

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Ron Miller
Ron Miller
3 years ago

Yikes. See if I ever take you up on a dare again.

Hitch
3 years ago

Ohhh, boys and girls, guess what? This book is now no longer on sale. Nathan, you should have used this in the Blurb category. Now your Double-Dog Dare is just a Mutt without a home.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
3 years ago

The Chosen One Series
(The Chose One Series Book 1)

Chosen One Series
Chose One Series

You want to be taken seriously, get a neutral third party editor.

Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
3 years ago

David Huffman’s “The Chosen One” is still up at Smashwords in case you are interested in the blurb.

Why is David Huffman’s “The Chosen One Series (The Chose One Series Book 1)” no longer up at Amazon?
Hmmm speculative minds may want to know.
There is the novel “The Chosen One” by Carol Lynch Williams up at Amazon.
Maybe Amazon Chose One.

Last edited 3 years ago by Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
Naaman Brown
3 years ago
Reply to  Naaman Brown

The David Huffman behind this “The Chosen One” is not the David Huffman behind “The Chosen”. The Netflix series “The Chosen One” is based on “Nino Santo” no connection to either. Very possibly the reason Amazon pulled this “The Chosen One”.

Brad
Brad
3 years ago

You should have gone for the “Triple Dog Dare” – no one can resist that one!:comment image

Last edited 3 years ago by Brad
Julie
Julie
3 years ago

Ohdear.

The cover on the Smashwords version is even worse.