Dear author: using first-line-indent paragraphs would significantly enhance the quality of your efforts.
Also, it’s “..as the Deputy Sheriff, my partner and I reached the back door…” not “and ME reached the back door.” Little easy trick–remove the other folks from the sentence. Would you say “as me reached the back door”? NO? Then don’t say it with your buddies thrown in.
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3 years ago
More like Mike Cya. The placement of the horse suggests a very different medical issue.
Dear author: using first-line-indent paragraphs would significantly enhance the quality of your efforts.
Also, it’s “..as the Deputy Sheriff, my partner and I reached the back door…” not “and ME reached the back door.” Little easy trick–remove the other folks from the sentence. Would you say “as me reached the back door”? NO? Then don’t say it with your buddies thrown in.
More like Mike Cya. The placement of the horse suggests a very different medical issue.
Ah, c’mon…it’s “hung like a…”