I hate to confess, here, but there are parts of this that I like. I like that patterned background, at the top; I even like that font, for this title, although it’s more than a skoosh hard to read, against that busy background. But, in terms of the feel, that font works, in the vicinity of that patterned top border. Then the eyes, the snow, the barren background…then it’s all just too much.
But this coulda been a contender, with a little bit more…finesse.
I hate to confess, here, but there are parts of this that I like. I like that patterned background, at the top; I even like that font, for this title, although it’s more than a skoosh hard to read, against that busy background. But, in terms of the feel, that font works, in the vicinity of that patterned top border. Then the eyes, the snow, the barren background…then it’s all just too much.
But this coulda been a contender, with a little bit more…finesse.