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Bruce
Bruce
5 years ago

Seems a bit dramatic after stepping in a pile of horse manure.

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EricL
EricL
5 years ago

Poor Stinky Thoughts. Her hippy parents must have been on a bad trip when they named her. As for her lost horse (Soul), doesn’t she realize that he’s right behind her?

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dtw
dtw
5 years ago
Reply to  EricL

Ha, I was assuming Stinky Thoughts was the name of the horse. I like your version better.

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Zsuzsa
Zsuzsa
5 years ago
Reply to  EricL

He’s not precisely “right behind her.” He’s merging into her shoulder. I would think that might be painful.

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dtw
dtw
5 years ago

The Amazon blurb contains this “sentence”:

Will, her soul, be lost entirely or will her Heavenly Father intervene by sending messengers to enlighten her understanding of right from wrong.

I don’t think punctuation’s her strong point. Which is a shame, for a writer …

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