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Hitch
5 years ago

Is that a rock growing out of her head?

JMoney
5 years ago
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And that is why composition matters. xD People just draw willy nilly, freakin drives me nuts.

JMoney
5 years ago

It just needs more to it. Like, a lot.

Sydney Blackburn
Sydney Blackburn
5 years ago

the unfurled wing appears to be coming out of the figure’s front whilst the furled wing seems to be attached somewhere on the left side of the spine…?

Hitch
5 years ago

Yup–actually, I thought that the unfurled wing appeared as though it was coming right out of her left boob.

Julie
Julie
5 years ago

I tried to read the “introduction” (she means “prologue”) and it’s a bunch of word salad nonsense with some super warped nonsense theology and lazy world-building.

B.L. Alley
5 years ago

Dammit Jim, you used the sketch instead of the finished cover!

Matthew
Matthew
5 years ago

Friend: “Hmm, you won’t be able to see much of her right wing.”
Author: *Proves friend wrong*

dtw
dtw
5 years ago

She had her chance for a decent cover, and Delilah Blew It.
Sorry.