Josh Daley’s has a first class career as a NFL footballer. He’s a front-page hunk and notorious womaniser, and the top of the popularity charts.
gives me no confidence that the author can actually write (you should not have an obvious typo in your description), and the British spelling of “womaniser” and the fact that she calls him a “footballer” tells me that she probably has no idea how American football is actually played.
Which associate of Josh Daley has a career? Why are we not focused on that person?
First-class, anyone? In the next sentence she demonstrates knowledge of proper hyphenation.
An NFL. Readability.
NFL “Footballer” said no one ever in one-hundred years.
What about the top of the popularity charts? Don’t leave me hanging!
They should also stop having so many secret babies. This is his second? His Secret Baby #2? How many more secret babies will he have? Tsk-tsk.
That baby’s expression says “GET ME OFF THIS COVER!”
Also, this part of the description:
gives me no confidence that the author can actually write (you should not have an obvious typo in your description), and the British spelling of “womaniser” and the fact that she calls him a “footballer” tells me that she probably has no idea how American football is actually played.
Yep. That excerpt is poorly written throughout.
Which associate of Josh Daley has a career? Why are we not focused on that person?
First-class, anyone? In the next sentence she demonstrates knowledge of proper hyphenation.
An NFL. Readability.
NFL “Footballer” said no one ever in one-hundred years.
What about the top of the popularity charts? Don’t leave me hanging!