Dee Dee’s Bridge The Beginning

Dee Dee’s Bridge The Beginning

So, thinking of adding a new “punctuation” tag…

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Tina
Tina
6 years ago

HOLY COW I got blindsided by a COMPLETELY different story when I read the taglines. That was not what I was expecting from that picture, title, and title font.
Whiplash for your potential readers.

janet
janet
6 years ago
Reply to  Tina

What is this book about?

Tina
Tina
6 years ago
Reply to  janet

From the title and art, I would’ve guessed a girl and her dog kinda story, or some whimsical child’s realistic fiction like “Bridge to Terabithia.” From the taglines, I guessed it explores cases of all kinds of child abuse. From the blurb, it’s one woman’s story.
It seriously needs a different font (this one is hard to read, anyway) and a new image. Something that better communicates a vulnerable memoir.

Cecilia Carey
Cecilia Carey
5 years ago
Reply to  Tina

Thanks for the feedback! I have to admit that my book cover needs work. Any more suggestions?