Redemption’s Blood is a gritty Western, filled with colourful characters, as a pig farmer, Jensen Hills, evokes his bloody past to exact justice on the men that killed a young boy; his only friend.
He “evokes” his bloody past? What is that even supposed to mean?
So, looking past the numerous sentence issues, Jensen Hills is a pig farmer who had a young boy as his only friend? Yikes.
“Filled with colourful characters.” As opposed to what? Filled with boring characters that leave your readers cold? Like your adult pig farmer, that only has a boy (?) as his friend? Mmmmmhmmmmm.
So Jensen Hills is a pig farmer who is filled with colorful characters? I can’t imagine how terrible the book must be when the author couldn’t write a coherent blurb.