The People (Karma Finds You Series Book 1)

Experts tried justifying this, tried explaining it with logic. Anything concluding her fallout to settle down students of the university, and residents surrounding. Doctors have deemed it mental, while well-known demonologists have come forward claiming evil spirits. One thing is certain. The details surrounding Kendall Harrison are not only baffling, they are terrifying.

But mostly baffling.

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Bruce
Bruce
6 years ago

“One thing is certain. The details surrounding Kendall Harrison are not only baffling, they are terrifying.”

While there is one thing certain about this blurb (it’s a train wreak), it’s incorrect to say one thing is certain and then list two things. Simple math, right?

And how does one get to be “well-known” for demonology?

dtw
dtw
6 years ago
Reply to  Bruce

Our chief weapon is surprise … surprise and fear … fear and surprise. … Our two weapons are fear and surprise … and ruthless efficiency. … Our *three* weapons are fear, surprise, and ruthless efficiency … and an almost fanatical devotion to the Pope. … Our *four* … no … *Amongst* our weapons … amongst our weaponry … are such elements as fear, surprise. … I’ll come in again.

Zsuzsa
Zsuzsa
6 years ago

“Anything concluding her fallout to settle down students of the university, and residents surrounding.”

Is that actually a sentence? Do those words mean anything when stated in that order? If so, I can’t figure it out.

dtw
dtw
6 years ago
Reply to  Zsuzsa

Glad it wasn’t just me having trouble with that bit.

Bruce
Bruce
6 years ago
Reply to  Zsuzsa

Yeah, I read that twice and gave up.

Naaman_Brown
Naaman_Brown
6 years ago
Reply to  Zsuzsa

I was taught in school that a sentence should have a verb somewhere.

That was back in the dark ages when senior grades 1-6 were called elementary, 7-9 were called junior high, and 10-12 were called high, and you actually had to pass tests to graduate.

Say Strunk & White to some of these people. You’ll get a blank stare, then hear shouts of “grammar nazi”.

Hitch
6 years ago
Reply to  Naaman_Brown

Shrunken White? You RAYCIST!

Gary
Gary
6 years ago

This blurb makes the English language cry.