The woman in the middle is not bad at all, but looks like a lot more effort has been expended on her than the other two. The squatting guy who’s lent her his gauntlet… don’t think plate armour is that articulated in real life, and possibly not human anatomy either, and he’ll either blunt his sword or do himself an injury if he is in the habit of using it like that. There also aren’t really shadows to suggest what I guess is meant to be electrical discharge. But agreed, the typeface is the main thing ruining it.
Okay, here’s my tweak to this, hopefully addressing SOME of the issues. I kinda liked the artwork except there wasn’t enough contrast for the energy to look really powerful/bright, and Darth Maul’s sister’s legs were unfeasibly long. Plus the font.
Agreed – though the guy kneeling looks like he’s saying ..”please, may I have my gauntlet back now?”
That devil-witch thing on the right is feeling a little uncomfortable.
“Uh, girl, I know the gauntlet’s cool, and you’re having a lot of fun, but you’re going to blow out the electrical system if you aren’t careful.”
“This is fine…”
– kneeling guy, probably
I thought she just looked cold.
The woman in the middle is not bad at all, but looks like a lot more effort has been expended on her than the other two. The squatting guy who’s lent her his gauntlet… don’t think plate armour is that articulated in real life, and possibly not human anatomy either, and he’ll either blunt his sword or do himself an injury if he is in the habit of using it like that. There also aren’t really shadows to suggest what I guess is meant to be electrical discharge. But agreed, the typeface is the main thing ruining it.
Please get a new font
Okay, here’s my tweak to this, hopefully addressing SOME of the issues. I kinda liked the artwork except there wasn’t enough contrast for the energy to look really powerful/bright, and Darth Maul’s sister’s legs were unfeasibly long. Plus the font.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1cnpBnCeopxs5KK1lJBA1nkg37LJRTCh8