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David King
6 years ago

She always wanted to be just a severed head floating around the docks

eduth
eduth
6 years ago

The “I” disappears into the background, so DEAL GIRL. No body? Deal!

Hitch
6 years ago
Reply to  eduth

No, actually, it looks like a White Slavery book–“I Deal Girl.” As in, “I Deal Girl, You Pay For Girl.” Altho…only a randy 14-15 y.o. boy would pay for that girl, who’s around that same age.

If you’re writing a book about an Ideal Girl, wouldn’t you put an ideal girl on the front? Or am I just being overly idealistic?

red
red
6 years ago

The girl she wanted to be … could wear flip-flops as she went cycling, instead of just scraping her neck along the pavestones.

Grackle
Grackle
6 years ago
Reply to  red

Haha, I love this.

EricL
EricL
6 years ago

Ideal

Cover

wouldn’t make you hunt for the rest of the title. Sigh…