Eighth Circle: A Special Place in Hell January 18, 2015 Eighth Circle: A Special Place in Hell A gritty police procedural? Sure, I got that. Spread the love Tags: false flagging, four of five dentists agree ◀ The Merry Munks: Douglas Forgets He’s Hiding! A Very Postal Christmas ▶ 2 Comments Oldest Newest Most Voted Inline Feedbacks View all comments RK 9 years ago If it weren’t false flagging, if the novel really were set in a flaming Hell, the whole thing would probably read like this: “Waaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuggggggggghhh!!!” “Waaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuggggggggghhh!!!” “Waaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuggggggggghhh!!!” Catie 9 years ago Of course you got that, it’s WRITTEN on the cover. This author doesn’t have a good grasp of show, don’t tell. It’s relevant for the cover too.
If it weren’t false flagging, if the novel really were set in a flaming Hell, the whole thing would probably read like this:
“Waaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuggggggggghhh!!!”
“Waaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuggggggggghhh!!!”
“Waaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuggggggggghhh!!!”
Of course you got that, it’s WRITTEN on the cover. This author doesn’t have a good grasp of show, don’t tell. It’s relevant for the cover too.