How to write haiku,
My pen glides over the paper,
The ink runs out, no refills,
Sadness…
red
9 years ago
A Haiku-like description of this cover:
Haiku Poems about Winter
Snow and Frost [above center]
(How to Write Haiku)
[A shot of snow and frost for you]
[Insert responsible party] . . . couldadone better.
I usually try to resist temptation when someone is giving their work away for nothing, but in this case, where they structured the type arrangement as a limerick instead of Haiku, it was just too much.
Haiku poetry
about winter snow and frost
(how to write haiku)
Being an all-around evil person as well as having too much time on my hands to do anything constructive, I offer this suggestion for a cover. I even took the liberty of changing the title to make the first line 5 syllables instead of 4.
http://imgur.com/JtE3i85 (the image plus all the other stuff they add, but it might be a more reliable link)
(I realize that nothing says Haiku quite like Currier & Ives, but it is amazing how unpopular pictures of snow and frost were before the advent of thermostatically-controlled central heat.)
How to write haiku,
My pen glides over the paper,
The ink runs out, no refills,
Sadness…
A Haiku-like description of this cover:
Haiku Poems about Winter
Snow and Frost [above center]
(How to Write Haiku)
[A shot of snow and frost for you]
[Insert responsible party] . . . couldadone better.
[At any rate the e-book costs only 99 cents.]
Considering the cover, I doubt it is worth even that.
I usually try to resist temptation when someone is giving their work away for nothing, but in this case, where they structured the type arrangement as a limerick instead of Haiku, it was just too much.
Haiku poetry
about winter snow and frost
(how to write haiku)
Crazy! It is a Haiku in that order.
How could they have missed that?!
My guess is that that’s what was intended, but they used a canned cover generator that had other ideas.
Oh right.
That makes sense.
😀
Or maybe it’s Book One of The Accidental Haikuist Series.
Being an all-around evil person as well as having too much time on my hands to do anything constructive, I offer this suggestion for a cover. I even took the liberty of changing the title to make the first line 5 syllables instead of 4.
http://i.imgur.com/JtE3i85.jpg (cover pic only)
http://imgur.com/JtE3i85 (the image plus all the other stuff they add, but it might be a more reliable link)
(I realize that nothing says Haiku quite like Currier & Ives, but it is amazing how unpopular pictures of snow and frost were before the advent of thermostatically-controlled central heat.)
Take decent picture
Crap all over it with text
Book covers are hard
Absolute Rubbish
Without a sense of purpose
Covers this cover
Yay! A real Haiku! Good job, Waffs! 🙂
*Blushes* as he smiles
Confidence swells up inside
Kris was teh impressed